Research Paper

The paper I have chosen to redo is my research paper. I would like to start off by saying that this research paper is a continuing problem for me. I think that this is because third quarter was a funky time for me as far as my grades went, so I didn't put my full effort into that paper. I also chose this paper because it reflects what I haven't yet learned this year and in a last effort I am going to try to conquer my habitual writing mistakes.

   My largest problem is sentence fluency. I think that I can work on the fluency not only between my sentences but also my paragraphs. Also, specific to my research paper, my quotes were not integrated into my paper well. My next problem is my word choice. I think that if I used some new words it would benefit my sentence fluency also. I think that the topic that I chose has much more potential than was reflected in my paper. This time around I hope to give more to this paper.